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deltablue Moderator
Number of posts : 7652 Age : 37 Team : Cyber Favourite Band : Within Temptation Location : Exeter/Canterbury Favourite Band\'s Logo : Registration date : 2008-07-11
| Subject: A poem Sat Jul 12, 2008 11:11 am | |
| My stories are far too big for a forum thread, but this is a poem I did about last year.
This is the story of 2007 Started in hell and ended in heaven So many friends and so much fun This is my homage to everyone And all the great times that mattered Especially when I got really battered This will be a long work of art It is about time I got to start
The defining moment was early and lingers When I gave the poser 2 fingers The valentines formal was the first event My friends persuaded me so I went It saw the best group picture ever Everyone had their poses, it was so clever Then the fundraiser for the LHK Had sweets thanks to Elena the pirate, way-hay And Tom had his go as a girl It was unsettling when he tried to give me a whirl For Paddies day we went on a crawl Why Bob wore a box confused us all Easter was boring and I had a sleep While everyone else went and tagged sheep When it came to the quiz we were the best Sorry team badge you’re just like the rest Even though half of us weren’t even playing George tossed sweets, Em nicked what I was saying Thank god for Elena who knew it all It was good fun though, we had a ball The last formal came early in the summer There wasn’t enough wine which was a bit of a bummer Emily saved the day, bringing all we could need She did a great job organizing this deed 2 birthdays came in late May Mine and Steph’s, around exams that was gay The LHK ball was a great way to end Steph bit George so she was clearly round the bend Summer was a bit of a bore I couldn’t wait ‘til autumn so I could have some more However seeing old prep school friends was good Emma and Stephanie were back in the hood Things resumed when Elena turned 20 Her mates were great so fun was plenty Then ArcSoc called so to the Ram I go But at the quiz it was the melon that stole the show The fireworks party was a night full of fun So many rockets it was just like a sun No space to be had for a while anywhere There were even 4 girls sat on the bottom stair Work eased off and I was filled with glee I had quite a few parties to see First was Emma, t’was a long way to go All the say up to London was a long way I know Then seeing Pedley for the first time in a while Charli still moved with her usual guile Finally at the end it was time to get down Jim’s rave cave was the best in town
Emily organized so many things Sammy was a lovable angel with wings Tom surfed the waves like a pro Chris knew of all the great places to go When Matt wore sunglasses he looked like a twit The back of a van was what Will often hit Taffy was the welsh guy we couldn’t understand Always with a pint glass or can in hand As a group team badge were the coolest of all Shame they were too pissed to save max from the wall Rob ruled Mario Kart, so fast he was hot Ben drowned his worms more often than not Pro evo was what Rudie taught me to play While Dave hammered Wiggy in every way Kimbell and Charles were as annoying as can be That’s why I have Lily to take them on with me Elena thought up of the most amazing stuff George never thought she was overexcited enough Steph seemed better behaved than the rest Those were a few of the guys who were best Plus Emma could drink all and every night Charli is still the goddess of love alright. Rosanna showed she was just as funny And Tim you’d better start saving that money. | |
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JoshyIsHere Bassist
Number of posts : 129 Age : 33 Team : Grind Favourite Music Genre : Rock/Metal/Punk Favourite Band : Hard question! Registration date : 2008-07-05
| Subject: Re: A poem Sun Oct 05, 2008 12:29 pm | |
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Max Admin
Number of posts : 8603 Age : 33 Team : Black Favourite Music Genre : Metal Favourite Band : Fightstar Current Mood : Favourite Band\'s Logo : Registration date : 2008-07-01
| Subject: Re: A poem Sun Oct 05, 2008 2:41 pm | |
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deltablue Moderator
Number of posts : 7652 Age : 37 Team : Cyber Favourite Band : Within Temptation Location : Exeter/Canterbury Favourite Band\'s Logo : Registration date : 2008-07-11
| Subject: Re: A poem Sun Oct 05, 2008 2:42 pm | |
| I doubt he likes it, which is fair enough | |
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Max Admin
Number of posts : 8603 Age : 33 Team : Black Favourite Music Genre : Metal Favourite Band : Fightstar Current Mood : Favourite Band\'s Logo : Registration date : 2008-07-01
| Subject: Re: A poem Sun Oct 05, 2008 2:44 pm | |
| Maybe he's 'coughing' as he felt he should have been included or something | |
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Shrimp loves RAM forever Ruler of the Lands
Number of posts : 7138 Age : 29 Team : Grind Favourite Band : Several. Location : N.I. Current Mood : Favourite Band\'s Logo : Registration date : 2008-08-16
| Subject: Re: A poem Sun Oct 05, 2008 2:45 pm | |
| Or maybe because its so long? | |
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deltablue Moderator
Number of posts : 7652 Age : 37 Team : Cyber Favourite Band : Within Temptation Location : Exeter/Canterbury Favourite Band\'s Logo : Registration date : 2008-07-11
| Subject: Re: A poem Sun Oct 05, 2008 2:46 pm | |
| well maybe he didn't like it because it was long. well it was about an entire eventful year. | |
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Shrimp loves RAM forever Ruler of the Lands
Number of posts : 7138 Age : 29 Team : Grind Favourite Band : Several. Location : N.I. Current Mood : Favourite Band\'s Logo : Registration date : 2008-08-16
| Subject: Re: A poem Sun Oct 05, 2008 2:47 pm | |
| True, so it couldnt have been short | |
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deltablue Moderator
Number of posts : 7652 Age : 37 Team : Cyber Favourite Band : Within Temptation Location : Exeter/Canterbury Favourite Band\'s Logo : Registration date : 2008-07-11
| Subject: Re: A poem Sun Oct 05, 2008 2:49 pm | |
| it was for facebook so I didn't want to leave stuff out. | |
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rometal101 Moderator
Number of posts : 1618 Age : 31 Team : Grind Registration date : 2008-07-06
| Subject: Re: A poem Sun Oct 05, 2008 4:40 pm | |
| That was a very good/bad poem..I wont lie there were good and bad parts about it... | |
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deltablue Moderator
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| Subject: Re: A poem Sun Oct 05, 2008 4:41 pm | |
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MrsDeathCARRs Ruler of the Lands
Number of posts : 5220 Age : 33 Team : Deathstars Favourite Music Genre : Deathstars Favourite Band : Deathstars Location : Look for Deathstars or Jimmy Carr Current Mood : Favourite Band\'s Logo : Registration date : 2008-08-28
| Subject: Re: A poem Sun Oct 05, 2008 6:31 pm | |
| I liked it a lot and I didn't see any bad parts but why not explain what they are? I write myself and find constructive criticism (telling me what's wrong with something) helps me to improve :D | |
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deltablue Moderator
Number of posts : 7652 Age : 37 Team : Cyber Favourite Band : Within Temptation Location : Exeter/Canterbury Favourite Band\'s Logo : Registration date : 2008-07-11
| Subject: Re: A poem Sun Oct 05, 2008 6:35 pm | |
| sometimes I think I packed a bit much into 1 line | |
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MrsDeathCARRs Ruler of the Lands
Number of posts : 5220 Age : 33 Team : Deathstars Favourite Music Genre : Deathstars Favourite Band : Deathstars Location : Look for Deathstars or Jimmy Carr Current Mood : Favourite Band\'s Logo : Registration date : 2008-08-28
| Subject: Re: A poem Sun Oct 05, 2008 6:37 pm | |
| But it works well or maybe it's the way I read it hehe | |
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