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PostSubject: 12 days of arcsoc   Fri Dec 19, 2008 12:39 pm

wanted to test this out before putting it on facebook. obviously it won't mean much to you guys but I wanted to see if I needed to change the structure at all.

On the 12th day of arcsoc the Ram gave to me
12 more pints for prefresh
11 paintballs in callum
10 goals in table football
9 bus rides for Phil
8 rubbish jukebox songs
7 broken itbox
6 nights out from Jenna
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2 Adam’s and Ali’s
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PostSubject: Re: 12 days of arcsoc   Sat Dec 20, 2008 6:30 am

Lol very good Excited/Very Happy:D

Now you have to make a video of you and your friends singing it while wearing Christmas hats Christmas Tongue
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PostSubject: Re: 12 days of arcsoc   Sat Dec 20, 2008 1:06 pm

That'd be funny Tounge Out

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PostSubject: Re: 12 days of arcsoc   Sat Dec 20, 2008 2:13 pm

That would be more than funny, but I think it'd be more likely for me to magically grow a foot taller overnight. Tounge Out
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PostSubject: Re: 12 days of arcsoc   Sat Dec 20, 2008 2:16 pm

a couple of lines could do with changes but I can't put my finger on which ones need it the most

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PostSubject: Re: 12 days of arcsoc   Sun Dec 21, 2008 6:29 am

you gonna create a video of it? pleeeaaassseeee... lol

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PostSubject: Re: 12 days of arcsoc   Sun Dec 21, 2008 6:30 am

Yeh. We did lol
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PostSubject: Re: 12 days of arcsoc   Sun Dec 21, 2008 6:40 am

I meant Henry, fool!

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PostSubject: Re: 12 days of arcsoc   Sun Dec 21, 2008 7:24 am

No. and before you all send 5 posts each pleading...

1) I have no video equipment

2) aside from playing vids I have no video-related programs on my laptop.

3) I can't sing

4) the others aren't around to sing it.

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PostSubject: Re: 12 days of arcsoc   Sun Dec 21, 2008 2:40 pm

Ziltoid The Omniscient wrote:
I meant Henry, fool!

Fool you Tounge Out
I was talking to Henry saying me & you (& Scott) did lol!
Another example of my "I'm not good at phrasing things"

Oh, and Henry, about #3, we can't sing either Tounge Out
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PostSubject: Re: 12 days of arcsoc   Mon Dec 22, 2008 9:40 am

Indeed we can't

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PostSubject: Re: 12 days of arcsoc   Mon Dec 22, 2008 9:56 am

that still leaves 3 points

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PostSubject: Re: 12 days of arcsoc   Mon Dec 22, 2008 9:58 am

You should come Torquay, we'll all sing it with you, us lot are game for anything Tounge Out

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PostSubject: Re: 12 days of arcsoc   Mon Dec 22, 2008 10:03 am

I'm not though. and its rather a long way at the mo.

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PostSubject: Re: 12 days of arcsoc   Mon Dec 22, 2008 10:05 am

oh yeah, of course hehe

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PostSubject: Re: 12 days of arcsoc   Wed Dec 24, 2008 11:01 am

This is the final version

On the 12th day of arcsoc the Ram gave to me
12 more pints for prefresh
11 paintballs in callum
10 goals in table football
9 bus rides for Phil
8 motions from Adam
7 broken itbox
6 nights out from Jenna
5 gigs in Bat Country
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3 pints max for Henry
2 melons ate by Ali
And a cider for Peggy

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PostSubject: Re: 12 days of arcsoc   Wed Dec 24, 2008 11:18 am

I like it better than the original. It flows better, especially line 2
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PostSubject: Re: 12 days of arcsoc   Wed Dec 24, 2008 11:21 am

The whole purpose of putting it up in the first place was so you'd point such flaws in the original lines out then, not now. its been posted now anyway.

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PostSubject: Re: 12 days of arcsoc   Wed Dec 24, 2008 11:22 am

Well it didn't seem like a flaw at first but compared to that one...
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PostSubject: Re: 12 days of arcsoc   Wed Dec 24, 2008 11:23 am

8 just seemed wrong as well

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PostSubject: Re: 12 days of arcsoc   Wed Dec 24, 2008 11:26 am

I prefered the jukebox songs line tbh.
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PostSubject: Re: 12 days of arcsoc   Wed Dec 24, 2008 11:33 am

no. that didn't seem to fit at all. 2nd was always a problem. it was originally going to be 'melons from sian', a reference to what I call 'the night of the melon' and the fact that she created a facebook account for it but there was something wrong with the whole '2 melons' thing. then I realized I should get adam and ali in so thats where the original came in. I knew it was a little desperate and was glad when I thought of something to replace it.

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PostSubject: Re: 12 days of arcsoc   Wed Dec 24, 2008 4:34 pm

lol it's not like the rest of us even know these people Laughing

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PostSubject: Re: 12 days of arcsoc   Wed Dec 24, 2008 4:45 pm

that wasn't the point. posting it was about seeing how it fits together. not whether the lines themselves make sense. and you do know 1 person.

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PostSubject: Re: 12 days of arcsoc   Wed Dec 24, 2008 4:51 pm

hmm..... who?

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