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Shrimp loves RAM forever Ruler of the Lands
Number of posts : 7138 Age : 29 Team : Grind Favourite Band : Several. Location : N.I. Current Mood : Favourite Band\'s Logo : Registration date : 2008-08-16
| Subject: Friends Tue Mar 17, 2009 5:41 pm | |
| I seem to be developing my poem writing ability And, I have wrote my first happy poem, so I thought you all might like to read it, FriendsI love you all so much Even when you embarrass me Or out smart me And make me feel dumb I love you all so Sometimes you take a joke too far But what is a joke amongst friends Like water under a bridge I love you all so Even when you worry so much About things that would never happen I listen to you, and give my piece of advice I just want you all to know, I love you all so much, forever.... | |
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MrsDeathCARRs Ruler of the Lands
Number of posts : 5220 Age : 33 Team : Deathstars Favourite Music Genre : Deathstars Favourite Band : Deathstars Location : Look for Deathstars or Jimmy Carr Current Mood : Favourite Band\'s Logo : Registration date : 2008-08-28
| Subject: Re: Friends Tue Mar 17, 2009 5:54 pm | |
| Gemma I love it so much :D I nearly cried, it's so beautifully written
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Shrimp loves RAM forever Ruler of the Lands
Number of posts : 7138 Age : 29 Team : Grind Favourite Band : Several. Location : N.I. Current Mood : Favourite Band\'s Logo : Registration date : 2008-08-16
| Subject: Re: Friends Tue Mar 17, 2009 5:57 pm | |
| I know you do, you were first to read it, before it was on here lol Awwww, I nearly cried at your reply to it on MSN :') By the way, does it seem like each stanza is sorta about a specific friend? Because I noticed it kinda does, but that may just be me because I wrote it | |
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Something.Less.Rude Rock God
Number of posts : 1462 Age : 30 Team : Thrash Favourite Music Genre : Metal/Metalcore Favourite Band : Aerosmith currently & MGMT Location : Here :] Current Mood : Favourite Band\'s Logo : Registration date : 2008-08-20
| Subject: Re: Friends Wed Mar 18, 2009 10:10 am | |
| Wow, that's how I was feeling yesterday, I really can connect with the emotion in the poem it's lovely tbh I felt that way towards my friends yesterday I tried to some it up in 140 characters on facebook but failed, Max commented on it actually it's lovely lol | |
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Starom Moderator
Number of posts : 1806 Age : 31 Team : Thrash Favourite Music Genre : Black/Death/Prog Metal/Gindcore/Deathcore Favourite Band : Way too many to name one XD Current Mood : Favourite Band\'s Logo : Registration date : 2008-08-16
| Subject: Re: Friends Thu Mar 19, 2009 4:07 pm | |
| Awh, it's really good ^^ | |
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Shrimp loves RAM forever Ruler of the Lands
Number of posts : 7138 Age : 29 Team : Grind Favourite Band : Several. Location : N.I. Current Mood : Favourite Band\'s Logo : Registration date : 2008-08-16
| Subject: Re: Friends Thu Mar 19, 2009 4:57 pm | |
| Thanks ^^ Though I am starting to wonder if I could have done better | |
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MrsDeathCARRs Ruler of the Lands
Number of posts : 5220 Age : 33 Team : Deathstars Favourite Music Genre : Deathstars Favourite Band : Deathstars Location : Look for Deathstars or Jimmy Carr Current Mood : Favourite Band\'s Logo : Registration date : 2008-08-28
| Subject: Re: Friends Sat Mar 21, 2009 7:48 am | |
| I think it's amazing as it is. What would you change about it? | |
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Shrimp loves RAM forever Ruler of the Lands
Number of posts : 7138 Age : 29 Team : Grind Favourite Band : Several. Location : N.I. Current Mood : Favourite Band\'s Logo : Registration date : 2008-08-16
| Subject: Re: Friends Sat Mar 21, 2009 7:51 am | |
| I don't know, I just wonder if I really tried if I could just make a better attempt, and make it seem less specific after all it's not meant to be XD | |
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MrsDeathCARRs Ruler of the Lands
Number of posts : 5220 Age : 33 Team : Deathstars Favourite Music Genre : Deathstars Favourite Band : Deathstars Location : Look for Deathstars or Jimmy Carr Current Mood : Favourite Band\'s Logo : Registration date : 2008-08-28
| Subject: Re: Friends Sat Mar 21, 2009 8:00 am | |
| I guess you could have a go at re-writing if you want. Maybe write another one on the same theme, though? Coz I really do think this is brilliant :D | |
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Shrimp loves RAM forever Ruler of the Lands
Number of posts : 7138 Age : 29 Team : Grind Favourite Band : Several. Location : N.I. Current Mood : Favourite Band\'s Logo : Registration date : 2008-08-16
| Subject: Re: Friends Sat Mar 21, 2009 8:02 am | |
| I guess I could write another, but I don't feel inspired to write anything at the moment, I guess I wil write another one some day
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MrsDeathCARRs Ruler of the Lands
Number of posts : 5220 Age : 33 Team : Deathstars Favourite Music Genre : Deathstars Favourite Band : Deathstars Location : Look for Deathstars or Jimmy Carr Current Mood : Favourite Band\'s Logo : Registration date : 2008-08-28
| Subject: Re: Friends Sat Mar 21, 2009 8:08 am | |
| onel Sorry couldn't resist given the current MSN convo ug Anyways yeh inspiration comes when you least expect it | |
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Shrimp loves RAM forever Ruler of the Lands
Number of posts : 7138 Age : 29 Team : Grind Favourite Band : Several. Location : N.I. Current Mood : Favourite Band\'s Logo : Registration date : 2008-08-16
| Subject: Re: Friends Sat Mar 21, 2009 8:23 am | |
| Atleast I didn't typo a typo Pretty much, when I'm next happier than usual I might get some inspiration as that was when I got inspiration for that one | |
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MrsDeathCARRs Ruler of the Lands
Number of posts : 5220 Age : 33 Team : Deathstars Favourite Music Genre : Deathstars Favourite Band : Deathstars Location : Look for Deathstars or Jimmy Carr Current Mood : Favourite Band\'s Logo : Registration date : 2008-08-28
| Subject: Re: Friends Sat Mar 21, 2009 10:38 am | |
| I love the new one you've wrote... | |
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