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PostSubject: Friends   Tue Mar 17, 2009 5:41 pm

I seem to be developing my poem writing ability Happy
And, I have wrote my first happy poem, so I thought you all might like to read it, Excited/Very Happy

Friends

I love you all so much
Even when you embarrass me
Or out smart me
And make me feel dumb

I love you all so
Sometimes you take a joke too far
But what is a joke amongst friends
Like water under a bridge

I love you all so
Even when you worry so much
About things that would never happen
I listen to you, and give my piece of advice

I just want you all to know,
I love you all so much, forever....
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PostSubject: Re: Friends   Tue Mar 17, 2009 5:54 pm

Gemma I love it so much Excited/Very Happy:D

I nearly cried, it's so beautifully written


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PostSubject: Re: Friends   Tue Mar 17, 2009 5:57 pm

I know you do, you were first to read it, before it was on here lol
Awwww, I nearly cried at your reply to it on MSN :')

By the way, does it seem like each stanza is sorta about a specific friend?
Because I noticed it kinda does, but that may just be me because I wrote it Laughing
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PostSubject: Re: Friends   Wed Mar 18, 2009 10:10 am

Wow, that's how I was feeling yesterday,
I really can connect with the emotion in the poem
it's lovely tbh

I felt that way towards my friends yesterday
I tried to some it up in 140 characters on facebook
but failed,
Max commented on it actually
it's lovely lol Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Friends   Thu Mar 19, 2009 4:07 pm

Awh, it's really good ^^ Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Friends   Thu Mar 19, 2009 4:57 pm

Thanks ^^

Though I am starting to wonder if I could have done better :/
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PostSubject: Re: Friends   Sat Mar 21, 2009 7:48 am

I think it's amazing as it is. What would you change about it?
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PostSubject: Re: Friends   Sat Mar 21, 2009 7:51 am

I don't know, I just wonder if I really tried if I could just make a better attempt, and make it seem less specific :/ after all it's not meant to be XD
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PostSubject: Re: Friends   Sat Mar 21, 2009 8:00 am

I guess you could have a go at re-writing if you want.

Maybe write another one on the same theme, though? Coz I really do think this is brilliant Excited/Very Happy:D
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PostSubject: Re: Friends   Sat Mar 21, 2009 8:02 am

I guess I could write another, but I don't feel inspired to write anything at the moment, I guess I wil write another one some day Laughing


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PostSubject: Re: Friends   Sat Mar 21, 2009 8:08 am

onel Tounge Out

Sorry couldn't resist given the current MSN convo Tounge Out ug Tounge Out

Anyways yeh inspiration comes when you least expect it Laughing
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PostSubject: Re: Friends   Sat Mar 21, 2009 8:23 am

Atleast I didn't typo a typo Tounge Out

Pretty much, when I'm next happier than usual I might get some inspiration as that was when I got inspiration for that one Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Friends   Sat Mar 21, 2009 10:38 am

I love the new one you've wrote...
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